nice to see a new reel! and i'm so glad u put music this time!! ^_^
as far as the work is concerned, it's good, but i'm sure u can FURTHER polish it, cuz the animation still looks like it's in 2nd or 3rd pass. infact frankly put, it's still like a student reel. :/
also u can get rid of some of the body mechanics pieces, they're unnecessarily increasing ur reel length and no one really cares abt seeing "jumps" or "weight lifts" anymore! u can so well show off ur body mechanics skills in ur pantomime or ur dialogue shots!
wow dapoon already commented...i will be honest ^_^ with my comments here..
Reel needs lot of work, i only liked ur pantomime thats the 2nd animation u have done..even in that when he picks up a bottle,he is doing it off screen..did u have constrain problems?? sihft to maya 8.0 r higher n start using ZV parenting script..because these r the things they will look for in companies i feel.
- i feel just polishing might not work..ur poses r too week..act out ur shots.
- as dapoon said i think u can remove lot thing from the reel 2:45 sec is looooong..u can reduce it under 2 min..u can have ur weight lift if u want n remove the jump..its just as dapoon said no one is willing to see assignments anymore.
- REMOVE ur 11sec dilog..haha..not good, its making the reel look bad.
- u can remove all the poses btw each animation which u have them for 6sec btw each animation..wastage of time..instead of that u can show a animated shot.
- i think u can just show the last 2 sketches,remove all those story board panels..not working.
ur pantomime looked good story wise n animation also.. i think u should start animating more.before u start applying :)
again its just what i felt.. one thing i can say u is, u will make mistakes,out of 10 animation u do one r 2 might turn out crap..u cant aviod it..but keep at it..go back to the basics
work hard u might become a great animator some day :)
nice stuff..like the part in the 1st clip where the char's hand hits the room lamp..gives a nice touch..and have to disagree on the length of the reel..2mins seems to be just abt the right length. The animations are way better than the ones u showed me last time! Best of luck,lux!
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hey lakshmi! how r u??
nice to see a new reel! and i'm so glad u put music this time!! ^_^
as far as the work is concerned, it's good, but i'm sure u can FURTHER polish it, cuz the animation still looks like it's in 2nd or 3rd pass. infact frankly put, it's still like a student reel. :/
also u can get rid of some of the body mechanics pieces, they're unnecessarily increasing ur reel length and no one really cares abt seeing "jumps" or "weight lifts" anymore! u can so well show off ur body mechanics skills in ur pantomime or ur dialogue shots!
just a thought though! and all the best!! ;)
wow dapoon already commented...i will be honest ^_^ with my comments here..
Reel needs lot of work,
i only liked ur pantomime thats the 2nd animation u have done..even in that when he picks up a bottle,he is doing it off screen..did u have constrain problems?? sihft to maya 8.0 r higher n start using ZV parenting script..because these r the things they will look for in companies i feel.
- i feel just polishing might not work..ur poses r too week..act out ur shots.
- as dapoon said i think u can remove lot thing from the reel 2:45 sec is looooong..u can reduce it under 2 min..u can have ur weight lift if u want n remove the jump..its just as dapoon said no one is willing to see assignments anymore.
- REMOVE ur 11sec dilog..haha..not good, its making the reel look bad.
- u can remove all the poses btw each animation which u have them for 6sec btw each animation..wastage of time..instead of that u can show a animated shot.
- i think u can just show the last 2 sketches,remove all those story board panels..not working.
ur pantomime looked good story wise n animation also..
i think u should start animating more.before u start applying :)
again its just what i felt..
one thing i can say u is,
u will make mistakes,out of 10 animation u do one r 2 might turn out crap..u cant aviod it..but keep at it..go back to the basics
work hard u might become a great animator some day :)
Cheers
Harish.k
nice stuff..like the part in the 1st clip where the char's hand hits the room lamp..gives a nice touch..and have to disagree on the length of the reel..2mins seems to be just abt the right length. The animations are way better than the ones u showed me last time! Best of luck,lux!
Good work :)
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